muffled, gathering...
downy snowflakes
all around
they come to rest one by one
on the doe's long lashes, above her liquid eye
her breath like a cloud, still - yet swirling
up to the stars to join the crystal frosts above
a little scribble in the margins of Winterkiln
Beautiful! I love the way you structured it.
ReplyDeleteThat was so beautiful!
ReplyDeleteGorgeous! ^_^ You have a way with words, darlin'! I love snow and stars... <3
ReplyDeleteSo pretty and winter-y <3
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